Well, this reader likes it, LOL! :P Very nicely done ♥
As for the level of acceptable heat at FF.net...I have a couple of what I'd consider to be full-fledged sex scenes posted there, which went unharmed during the mass deletion. I think it depends on what level of detail you get into - the stories I dared post there are kinda heady, if that makes sense? More cerebral, less nuts and bolts. IDK.
This chapter was a nice even mix, I thought - enough thought/backstory to keep it from being straight-up porn. I'm not sure where you intend to go from here, but I'm certainly looking forward to it, LOL! :P
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As for the level of acceptable heat at FF.net...I have a couple of what I'd consider to be full-fledged sex scenes posted there, which went unharmed during the mass deletion. I think it depends on what level of detail you get into - the stories I dared post there are kinda heady, if that makes sense? More cerebral, less nuts and bolts. IDK.
This chapter was a nice even mix, I thought - enough thought/backstory to keep it from being straight-up porn. I'm not sure where you intend to go from here, but I'm certainly looking forward to it, LOL! :P