D'aww, I rather like foreplay, myself, and this definitely hit the spot ;) I'm totally with you on the hand-holding (as I mentioned in my review :P)
You definitely didn't break the flow of sexy with this chapter - and I kinda like that you moved away from the heavy angst of the previous chapter with this one. It will make their further explorations feel lighter, freer, if that makes any sense :P
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You definitely didn't break the flow of sexy with this chapter - and I kinda like that you moved away from the heavy angst of the previous chapter with this one. It will make their further explorations feel lighter, freer, if that makes any sense :P